Saturday, May 14, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Happy Sunday, peeps!

I had such a wonderful time participating in Sex Sentence Sunday last week, I had to come back and hang with you all again!

I posted a snippet from my erotic romance, Obsessed last time, so I'm gonna stick with that story and tempt you with some more.

Lead in- The hero, Nick is walking home from the the Black Diamond and sees Halley, the beautiful woman he felt drawn to back at the bar. She's unconscious and being dragged into an alley by a pervert.


Fury, hot and uncontainable, burned through Nick as he flew down the narrow alley and barreled into the sick bastard leering over Princess, sending them both careening across the filthy pavement. Gruesome memories tore through his consciousness. Pictures he’d tried so hard to bury, to forget, came floating up to the surface, fueling his rage. Blood—God, there’d been so much blood. On the walls, on the carpet, seeped into the mattress under—
The sound of bone snapping and cartilage crunching filled the air as Nick beat the living piss out of the pervert. “Goddamn freak. You…don’t…hurt…women.” 

I think that's 7 sentences, oops!!

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62 comments:

Meghan and Katelyn said...
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Lorien Velez said...

Whoa.. don't mess with Nick. Love your description. Great six! :)

Laura Kaye said...

Hmm...I think he has an interesting backstory to be revealed!

Lucy Felthouse said...

Nice sentences, Lisa! :)

Lisa Fox said...

Wow, that is intense! Really great writing!!

Luxie Ryder said...

Eeek! I guess the message here is don't mess with Nick! This is an exciting scene, building real tension and showing his outrage. Great six!

Gem Sivad said...

Tight, crisp scripting that hits with as hard a punch as Nick's. Great six!

Carolyn Rosewood said...

Wow! Really intense!

Gayle said...

I think we have a bit of a complex fellow, here! Great six.

Lisa said...

Thank you so much for stopping by ladies!

Jessica Subject said...

This is a fabulous excerpt! You show his emotion so well, yet there is mystery to get us intrigued. Need to know more. :)

Graylin said...

I'm hooked. A glimpse into a complicated history mid-action scene. Definitely want to see more of this!

JoAnne Kenrick said...

Love the emotions here, nice six..seven... whatever, it's fab!

AllureVanSanz said...

Avenging angels rock. Good job showing not just his anger, but his reason for the intensity.

Best,
Allure

Sandy Ruth said...

Action-packed six (or seven?) I love that he didn't even pause to think - he just flew down the alley. A true hero.

Lindsay said...

YOu had to have the seventh sentence. Can't leave us hanging

Hailey Edwards said...

Great pacing, vivid description. Very action-packed.

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