Sunday, June 12, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Woohoo! Here we go again!  Big shout of thanks to those who've taken the time to stop by, read my snippets and comment. I've got mad love for you. Mad love!

This week's blurb is once again taken from Love In The Time Of Witches. The last few posts have been from the Traveler's POV, so this week I'm giving you a little teaser from Taylor's POV.

Just like Traveler, Taylor has gone back in time. Unlike Traveler, she doesn't know where she is, and is very much afraid. She's been wandering around the woods, alone, in the middle of the night. Yeah...not fun.


I stepped forward ready to track down the distant voice when something sharp speared the ball of my foot. I pitched forward, clutching my injured extremity and swore like a sailor. Off kilter, I crash-landed into a gaggle of ferns and various shrubbery. “Mother freaking piss! Ouch!”
Yes, yes…I was more than aware that rocking back and forth while howling in pain did nothing to improve my situation.  At that point, I didn’t care. Whimpering felt natural, so I let go and had myself a good cry. 

Make sure to stop by and check out the other Six Sentence Sunday offerings here.

Have a great week!

21 comments:

Patricia Preston said...

Foot pain will make you scream regardless.

Laura Kaye said...

Vivid description!

Heather Thurmeier said...

"Mother freaking piss!" Made me laugh. I know this is a painful experience, but that reaction just felt so natural! excellent!

Cate Masters said...

Ouch! Felt her pain. Wandering in the woods in the middle of the night's definitely no fun. Nice teaser.

Lisa Fox said...

Sometimes you gotta just scream and wail. There's no avoiding it.

Lisa said...

Hee hee, thanks for the kind words, ladies!

gayleramage said...

God, I think we've all done something like that when we've hurt ourselves. Great six!

Sandra Sookoo said...

lol that made me laugh. Loved it!

Liz said...

well written, and entertaining...makes me want to know more...
cheers
Liz

Luxie Ryder said...

I feel her pain. I've have reacted in exactly the same way. Great six!

Zee Monodee said...

Yikes! What an awful predicament to be in. Great six!

Jessica Subject said...

Swearing and crying seem to come together when injured like that. Nice six!

Cassandra Carr said...

LOVE the imagery! I would totally react like that too.

Lindsay said...

Love the six especially the last line

Sarah Grimm said...

Yikes! Sounds awful! I'd be whimpering, too. Great job!

Charlotte Gatto said...

I love the swearing! And I agree, sometimes crying does help.

Lisa said...

Thanks, everyone!!!

J.A. Beard said...

I'd be pretty freaked if I didn't know where or when I was.

Monica Enderle Pierce said...

Aw, poor scared girl. Gotta say I love your last line. 'Whimpering' is a perfect contrast to her cussing.

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